Story: I Do
By Innortal
Genres: Humor

Comment 1. February 11, 2010 | Posted By: N/A | Edit | Delete | Report Abuse | Report Spam | Assign Comment to Author
ok its started out ok not to wild and believable
but as you kept going you started getting more and more well dramatic and crazy and well i just dont know how to explain it
also it was modestly funny in the beggining but i think you may have taken it too far honestly so far my count is like over 20 marriages and 5 to 8 pregnancies honestly man that is not all that funny
the story at this point looks like you milked it a little too much and it stopped being enjoyably funny and now is sad, confusing and well i dont want to read it because now the story feels ruined
im not trying to be rude but you started off great  i mean good job but now its a train wreck
i actually enjoyed reading the beggining when there was some innocense in the story    but now i havent enjoyed reading the last few chapters
i not trying to be the worlds biggest jerk here but a little control and sanity would be appreciated
 

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