Story: Evangelion Genocide: Extended
By Rommel
Genres: Drama, Action

Comment 1. March 4, 2010 | Posted By: N/A | Edit | Delete | Report Abuse | Report Spam | Assign Comment to Author
Hi sorry I have not posted a review for quite a while but I have been really busy with my Film and Creative writing course at University in all honesty as well as moving house. The last two chapters have been brilliant. I am really enjoying the subtle changes you are making to Asuka's character as they are believable changes for starters. Unlike alot of fanfiction I read where the protagonists change drastically over a short period of time, Asuka and Shinji to an exstent, have both changed slowly which is more enjoyable to read about in my opinon. 
Im really interested in where Klunge and SEELE are going to take the story but (Predicatably) I wish for a happy ending of sorts.

Anyway keep up the good work. Your writing is really enthralling to read and I'm taking alot of notes on some of the stylistic choices and methods you use to improve upon my own creative work which has consisted of far too much poetry for my liking. Cheers

Dean
 

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