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By Rx7
Genres: Lemon, General

Comment 1. May 19, 2010 | Posted By: poker francais | Report Abuse | Report Spam | Assign Comment to Author
Thanks for sharing this site and article. It is well written and good story.
Comment 2. December 2, 2007 | Posted By: Lex_Sandar | Report Abuse | Report Spam | Assign Comment to Author
Interesting and well written. I agree with the previous comments that it is a solid story, and it might be interesting to see more. The story seems much more in character than many lemons, and takes into account that its a story about two inexperienced teenagers, and not a pair of porn stars. Its a story about the characters, and not just people with their name and appearance...and that makes a huge difference.
Comment 3. May 11, 2007 | Posted By: dennisud | Report Abuse | Report Spam | Assign Comment to Author
You know... this is how a good and considerate hentai should be written with the feelings of even these two restricted and lonely souls they interacted and felt for each other 'before' all the sex.

I really want to see if a second chapter would allow Rei her satisfaction as I see this Shinji would Now go all out to satisfy her needs.

This is one of the beat Eva hentai's I have read in a long while
Well written and an actual story to with the love making!

You DO see I said love making and not sex. Tha's what makes a great hentai.

dennisud
Comment 4. May 7, 2006 | Posted By: BC Baron | Report Abuse | Report Spam | Assign Comment to Author
Hi There,

This was probably the most romantic lemon I have ever read. As you may have guessed, I am a fan of Shinji+Rei. Definitely meets the most important of quality lemon criteria - if you remove the sex scenes, do you still have a good story? I say definitely.

I already feel like I identify with the character of Shinji quite a bit, but, as I was reading this story very late at night, I rather enjoyed the idea that you were portraying Shinji as a bit of a night owl.

The dialogue was simple and very much in character. Having both of them share the same dream (which takes place on a train) and then meet each other on the same train struck me as a fantastic way to make the whole story seem authentic and believable. It reminded me so much of all those dream/inner monologue sequences from the series. Plus it adds to the whole metaphysical connection these two characters share.

Very few lemons affect me enough to make me think about what if scenarios for the series, but your story makes me wonder if Shinji and Rei could have just spent some more time getting to know one another... I don't know, maybe they could have found some peace of mind (as foolish as that probably sounds).

At the very least perhaps Shinji might not have been as afraid of intimacy and Rei might have even been able to see herself as a real person rather than something made of straw.

Well, I should probably sign off before I digress any further. In closing, just wanted to say that I enjoyed this story. Good stuff.

Thanks for writing it.

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